What about a bit of beach verse ?

Question: What about a bit of beach verse !?

Condensed a line of thought into two words each, with any luck my brain made the right selection to retain a visual picture!.

As always, comments, good or bad, are most welcome!.

Golden sky
faded color
Gray waters
shore kisses

Sharks maneuver
gulls await
Rainbow arches
kaleidoscope splashes

Sun blazed
colors paled
Tanned bodies
skittle suits

Warm sands
time chills
Memory flickers
darkness calls

Night illuminated
lighthouse winked
Visual reminder
footsteps past
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is simply beautiful, and very effective!. The "smaller brush strokes" have created a lovely visual work!. Every single word counts and every two word line speaks volumes!. I love this!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You just forgot two lines:

I wanna
Go there!.

How do you DO that!? The capturing of a painting in two-word lines!? However you do!.!.!.this Good Morning!.!.!.good poem! is for you!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this a lot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com