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Question: Whatcha think of these poems!?
I love the rain
It washes away my pain
I love a pleasant breeze
It keeps away my mental agonies
I love the snow
It hides what I cannot show
I love the sun
It lets me have so much fun

and

Loose words in my mind
Can’t seem to find
Their way through my writing vessel
My trusty pencil
Thoughts stuck in my head
Can’t make it through the lead
Text destined to be stuck for all time
In a line that doesn’t rhyme
Lost souls that can’t reach the paper
Stay confined in the mind of the writer
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Loved the second one, hated the first one!. Always provide a title; it doesn't have to be the final title--a working title!. "Love the rain"--You are a bit moody!.!.!.heehee!. I liked 'Loose Words' because you are telling me exactly what is going on inside your mind, even as you write it down!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Something's lacking!. or maybe you have just said everything!.
poetry is a very complex art and it is appreciated by,somehow, intelligent people!. a line may be explained in a paragraph, if it is well created!. i mean poets write everything with a cause, including the articles!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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yes, i enjoyed those! thanx 4 sharingWww@QuestionHome@Com