Where will you find your heart tonight?

Question: Where will you find your heart tonight!?

Dawn to Dusk

Sunlight breaks
She takes
My hand

Holding tears back
I swell inside
Feeling full
Senses lull me
To her

Eyes smiling
Say more
Much more than
Words can

Lips lean in
Kisses cleaning
Stained cheeks

Smoothing
Rough edges
Soothing me
Moving me

Close
Closer
Closest

Moonlight breaks
And still……

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Finish it!!!! You had me going!. That is so sensual!. It's like a good first date!. Get to the end!Www@QuestionHome@Com

My heart,
lit under the full moon,
silver crimson,
like liquid silk
it flows into the night,

and it sings a lilting song,
bringing words from the earth,
calling to me,
wait for love, not a love
of transience
but a love

of transcendance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best not to end it!.!.!.!.Love is always wonderful in the beginning and it has a hopeful end!.!.!.

But if you must keep on writing, how about companion pieces "Why didn't you put the dishes in the dishwasher!?" or "You don't talk to me anymore!?", or a true classic "Why are you staring at her a s s!?"Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's beautiful
But one thing you might look at is when you say close, closer, closest!.!.!.It just doesn't seem right!.
But other than that tiny detail you are a very beautiful poem writed with much skill
:)

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Moonlight serenade!.!.!.only awaiting the morning for more light to shine upon you!. Sleep in dreams tonight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Close,
Closer,
Closest!.

And the closer she gets,
The Further He Goes!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

A little tease is a good thing!.!.!.!.your words set the mood for the reader's imagination to take over!. I loved it! Thank you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This really feels like reading a romance novel!. Reminds me of Danielle Steel and Judith McNaught!Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.!.!.!.a million miles away!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are such a tease!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com