Please rate my poem!? 10points?

Question: Please rate my poem!!? 10points!?

At first you don’t realize!.
You never realize at first!.
You don’t realize and it passes by

Later, only after it passes by do you realize
You realize and you regret
You laugh at how silly you were

Now everything is much more difficult
You realize and you regret
You miss the first, and even the later

Now it’s all over
However it has been so fast!.
Now you realize and you regret
Now you realize and you regret
It’s hard to laugh at yourself now
It has been all been wasted!.
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I really like it!. But, are the two repeating lines at the bottom supposed to be there!? If not, I'd edit it :) If they are, I'd remove one of them!. It doesn't really make sense with two of the same lines!. also, I would change the last line into "Now that it has all been wasted!." For some reason, I think it would be more powerful!.

Usually, I'm against poems with no details in them, but I actually really like what you've done with this one!. Even though there's no details as to what you're really talking about, it still has that same WOW! factor, you know!? Overall, I'd say about a 9!.5/10!. Great job :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I give it a 7!. I really liked it, it had a message, a story!. But personally I didn't feel enough from what the message was trying to say!. It's missing something but I won't help to fix something that is yours!. Good Luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

10!
ooh! i love it! its awesome!.!.!. i wish i could write like that!. i love what you're saying!. its really good, keep up the good work!

please help me out dorks!.!.!.
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I think it is an interesting but great poem that will definitely relate to a lot of people!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow thats deep i like it, i like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well out of 1-10 6Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good but the rhythm is a little off!. It just doesn't flow together very well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

9!.096Www@QuestionHome@Com

wonderful 100points
do keep it up
congratsWww@QuestionHome@Com

i give it a ten! have a star 2!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow i L-O-V-E it !!! kinda ture to some of my friends i know :)

awsome Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is a bit confusing honestly but if u read it like 3 times then u will get it use better words Www@QuestionHome@Com