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A Martian Pome
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Ready or not, here we write!
Every poet’s needed delight, from
Dawn’s fresh birth to ebon night!.

Play we all in language land,
Laugh and cry and muse
All searching, trying to attain, this
Newer tongue to use!.
Enter into the Golden Dome
There to know, at last, we’re home!

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This poem holds more truth than we realize!. All who have a passion for writing poetry will attempt to put something on paper worthy of submission or not!. We play around with words and thoughts hoping that the right combination will eventually be satisfactory to us and acceptable to those who we call our family!.

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Some already have started to play
Within the Golden Dome
While others stand on land-bound earth
No place that they call "home"

Be sure to call out from the Dome
Beckon one another
When the time is right and ready
To Sister and to Brother

Exclude them not, welcome them
Block only the trouble makers
Ensure the safety of your friends
From trolls and other law breakers

Life on Mars is looming fast
Prepare the rocket flames
Buckle up, brace for the flight
and enjoy the Martian Games

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That is so clever, maybe I should try one; you have a lovely touch dear!. Your meter is just wonderful too; that's special!. Dear, I've got a Trigee up right now and I'm not just sure if I'm doing it right; I'd be honored if you'd have a look!. Thanks!. You've brightened my day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

well, the poem itself is really good!. its creative and well written and it even rhymes!! the only problem i have with it is!.!.!.!. what does it have to do with mars!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Make your way
All will play
Ripe with humor
Some will say

All day long
Wits at bay
Aptly to portray
Yet to be seen!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hooray, hooray!! I'm ready to play!

*I also think it's neat the way you made it rhyme! (Wink)
(Sorry, that was my naughty streak sneaking out again!. It's been a LONG week!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, well! Meter! Exclamation to you!!

Oh, and we will have to call this one a po-em!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is really good!. i love how you also rhymed (:Www@QuestionHome@Com

Mighty words you pen
Art in them all
Rights written to see
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I'm for one, glad that your blockage has seemed to moved on!.!.!.!.Great read CS!.!.!.!.I enjoyed it immensely!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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