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Question: Would you care to comment on a Sunday morning Pome!?
A cup of coffee at my desk
while guests have gone to pack
herald their leaving for a couple of days,
fellow poets, I am back!

I really have so missed you,
I've been away too long,
I really do need solitude
to help me right this wrong!.

I am so very happy
when all your names I see
a message, how important
you have all become to me!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
fish and visitors stink after three days (or something like that)
Ben FranklinWww@QuestionHome@Com

And we're all glad you are back dear!. I know, I just sent my company away two days ago!. Nice verse to celebrate being back with your friends at Y!A!. I am no expert in poetry, but if I were trying to make this even better I might tighten up that meter in places:

A cup of coffee at my desk;
My guests have gone to pack!.
I herald their departure:
Dear poets I am back!.

I really have so missed you
I've been away too long!.
But I have needed solitude
To help me right a wrong!.

I am so very happy!.
Your names once more I see;
Your blessing - how important
It has become to me!.

Now you've made me wish I had a coffee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well this is really swell
i feel you are so kind

i would like to say more
but not much comes to mind

exept i hope to know you better
and although we have not met

i think your poem has introduced
us and so this now is set

i look forward to your storys
and welcome back i say
to you and all poet's
on this lovevly SundayWww@QuestionHome@Com

It seems "life" has been interfering with a lot of quiet yahoo coffee mornings!.
Glad to have you back!
It seems we're getting overflow (just rain) from Ike or one of those other creatures!. It sure is a peaceful sound on the new roof!Www@QuestionHome@Com

My brew has quit it's drippin'!.
So, from my cup I'm sippin'!.

No company, just lots of critters!.
(That's why I've got the jitters!.)

(And I refuse to offer any to the chickie!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was wondering where you had gotten off to,,, mighty glad to see your smiling face gracing this hallway again and to read what your nimble fingers have penned!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And we are always glad to see you! Pass the coffee and let's chat a bit!.!.!.coffee and conversation!.!.!.few things are better!

Good Morning!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Coffee brings reflections
mind conversations
until day beckons you
sip again and dream

GM to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Glad you are back!. We are all important to each other!.

Very sweet poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I get on-line at home and work,
Though all my duties I don't shirk!.
There's always one who likes my mess!.
And her initials; C!.S!.S!.

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I like my coffee with cream!. Nice to have you back(with such 'fresh' lovely words)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Welcome back!.!.!.I have felt your pain!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cafe au lait'
Hot beignet
Never a day
To not say
HEY

Peace,RWww@QuestionHome@Com