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Question: What is your interpretation of my poem!?

From reading my poem, Specificly what do you feel happened to me!?


"Tears from within"

Tryin to hide, it’s not working as planned

Seeing my life, finding it hard to stand

For I never thought I’d see the day

I let a guy do it that way

I felt the warmth, of his hand

Against my ribs, my neck, my hand

Feeling the breath ripped from inside

I had an attack, I couldn’t hide

I was shaking, couldn’t stay steady

What have I done, I wasn’t ready

Days went by, still seeing the guy

He kept coming back, when i'd said goodbye!.



I'm 15 and i wrote this about an awful experience that i had!.!.!.

Please be honest with your comments!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I responded to your other question about this poem!. I think you were raped!. You may have wanted to experiment, but when it came right down to it, you said NO, and he didn't care!.

Take care of YOU! I spent 3 years with a rape counsellor!.

T!.
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From the way I interpret your poem, I get a feeling of how you had acted in a romantic relationship with another person and you had allowed it at first but then realised you weren't ready for this and said no!. But even if you said no, the person kept coming back and back for more of a sexual relationship with you - leading to rape!.

I'm very sorry for this incident!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like rape!. Get some counselling!. Keep away from these unwanted advances!. Do not devalue yourself!. Keep writing poetry as it may be a way you can help yourself to understand the situation and help you come to terms with this awful experienceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Forgive me if i'm wrong, but I thought it was maybe about you being sexually assulted!? Raped by a guy you thought you could trust!. Someone who thought they could use you against your will and throw you away!.!.!.Of course I could be utterly wrong, but that's what I think!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like you regretted something that have been done to you!
I'm not really sure but I can feel the pain within this!.!.

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grat poem!. i can feel your regret!. i can feel how you dread to hurt, Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like you slept with himWww@QuestionHome@Com