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Question: THIS POEM WAS ACTUALLY FOR A CLASS PROJECT---BUT WHAT THE HEY---WHY SHOULD I SHARE IT!?
Mon-tes-quieu

A Division of power
An idea that lasted more than an hour
Montesquieu a liberty enthusiast
Over simplified!? Or thought-out, planned and devised!?
Checks and balances!? Or checks that balance!?
Early ideas of reform and early ideas of a rebirth!.
The falsely hood of appearance is a paddle that steers inspiration
“Separation it is”!.
And so it was decided
Checks and balances, the equilibrium of power!Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Why should you share it!?
I would say that you either want compliments on the poem or that you want some constructive comments on how to make it better!.

The first line doesn't need the word "A" in it!.
For example

Division of power
ideas that last but an hour


Next ---The mentioning of Montesquieu seems out of place here!.
It is as if you were assigned homework to write a poem with his name in it, and you just threw it randomly in the poem

Here is information about him
Montesquieu was one of the great political philosophers of the Enlightenment!. Insatiably curious and mordantly funny, he constructed a naturalistic account of the various forms of government, and of the causes that made them what they were and that advanced or constrained their development!. He used this account to explain how governments might be preserved from corruption!. He saw despotism, in particular, as a standing danger for any government not already despotic, and argued that it could best be prevented by a system in which different bodies exercised legislative, executive, and judicial power, and in which all those bodies were bound by the rule of law!. This theory of the separation of powers had an enormous impact on liberal political theory, and on the framers of the constitution of the United States of America!.


Idea

In a Montesquieu sort of minute
A rush of enthusiasm
Fueled by liberty
pragmatic thoughts
source by diversed enthusiasm

Balanced by ambugity
stimulates ideas of
Checks - Balances ideas of reform
wanders the need for rebirth or just false apperances
Stired by knowledge
of equilbrium
reforn or checking out
seperation of ideas


Just a few idea for you to explore




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Great! here is a poem from me:
Mccain&Palin
McCain and Palin
Palin and McCain
they will be in office
don't you think!
I love mcCain and palin
what about you!

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haha, cute :)
its about a different topic than most!.
and not completely depressing, or over the top with enthusiasm!.
i liiikkkeee it !.:DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Love it! Never heard a poem so economically political and/or so timely!. You get and A plus from me and a gold star!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really like it! it gets u thinking! Www@QuestionHome@Com