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Question: Are words worth the price I'm paying!?
Too much said
So much lead
Weighty thoughts
Holding down
His write
To right

Go
Gone
No need here
Just steer clear
To safe ground
To rebound

To replace
The taste
Of hope
That sits
On lips
So sweetly
They defeat me

Remnants remain
Scraping pain
From within
Thin skin
Again

I offend




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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'm learning that SOME words hold no worth, yours I enjoy reading!Www@QuestionHome@Com

There is this little song I wrote
I hope you learn it note for note
Like good little children
Don't worry, be happy

Listen to what I say
In your life expect some trouble
But when you worry
You make it double
Don't worry, be happy!.!.!.!.!.!.
Don't worry don't do it, be happy

Put a smile on your face
Don't bring everybody down like this
Don't worry, it will soon past
Whatever it is
Don't worry, be happy


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All you post is worthy, for someone, "Can't please all of the people all of the time!." and sometimes and things we should only share with safe people, posted on here is wide open for the whoever! It's a risk!.

This is a neat poem, Looks good on paper too! Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Remnants and scraps is all I have
Held together with a soothing salve
The decades have left me as I am
Colorful brush into Autumn!.
If I offend
The world will
Not end
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