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Question: Would this be considered romantic or obsessive!?
Would you dance with me if you knew you could!?
Would you swing me, dip me and jive me!?
Would you tell me lies that I might believe,
And would you my dreams retrieve!?

Would you take me out on a sailboat to sea!?
Swim in the ocean, happy and free!?
Should you know who you are,
Would you answer me!?

Would you carry me off on a moonlit ride!?
Would you clutch me gently at your side!?
Would you wrap me in your warmth!?
And in me your love confide!?

It s a fairy tale, but if played out well
This nefarious spell
And the days in succession
Should
Relieve me this obsession!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
As you have heard from some of the other answers romantic poetry is also obsessive sounding and i do agree with this statement however i think that romance is an obsession in its self so take what you will form that but i really enjoyed reading your poem romantic or obsessive!.
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Very nice romantic statement!.
Romantic dancing!.!.!. reminds me of the following song!.!.!.

I dont want to be the kind to hesitate,
Be too shy, wait too late
I dont care what they say other lovers do,
I just want to dance with you!.

I gotta feeling that you have a heart like mine,
So let it show, let it shine!.
If we have a chance to make one heart of two,
I just want to dance with you!.

I want to dance with you, twirl you all around the floor
Thats what they intended dancin for,
I just want to dance with you!.
I want to dance with you, hold you in my arms once more,
Thats what they invented dancin for,
I just want to dance with you!.
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=uOURWjGcn!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And were you to dance
Would it be romance!?
If this your confession
Could it be obsession!?
So to make it so
Will the words not go!?
Or for it to be
Must your words he see!?

Hope springs eternal for all!.!.!.Nice words you pen!.!.!.againWww@QuestionHome@Com

Romantic, yes!. Obsessive, no!.

But then again, all romantic poetry is a little obsessive!.
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Honey, this is just plain BEAUTIFUL!!
God Bless, and offer relief !.

*EDIT: To answer the original question so I don't get reported, I'd say it's romantic and wonderful!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cosign Neonman - what he said! and Reenie - B-ew-di-ful po-em!

Romatic not obsessive!. Obsession is in your mind on this occasion!. It has not been expressed as such!. Good one, Mad! Www@QuestionHome@Com

This and I repeat this is romantic! Beautiful words delivered with a great rhythm and end rhyme too! My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I say romantic!Www@QuestionHome@Com

To go with everyone else so far, Yes, romantic!Www@QuestionHome@Com

this piece of work is great hun! def romantic!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!.!.!. a little of both!.!. but more on the romantic sideWww@QuestionHome@Com