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Question: Please my austalian master and others too kindly evaluate the poet in Me!?
PRETTY POEM TWO!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.For U!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

Politeness
Parsimonous
Rigorous
Respectful
Racial
Enthralling
Entreaty
Tiradeous
Triangular
Trustworthy

Howza howza howza
Yawning yawning yawning



OH MY LOVING GOD!

Intellectual are my generations'beings,
Greatest curse on present day progeny,
officious,malicious and mercenary,
Cruel,lascivious,a class of humanity!.

This planet they call, a global village
Pray have some sense of privilege,
And upon the pedestal of man's remains
Pray do not make indellible domains,
Of time and space,yet to traverse!.
Make not this planet an aliens'retreat,
A symbol of monumental defeat!.

Our vision should not blind us,
Our ego should not devour us,
And leave our remains on a river bed,
But make for us a heavenly pedestal, instead!.



















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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
yes, you have quite the extended vocabulary!
but that's great!
your poem(s!?) are fantastic! very expressive and powerful!
i adore the last stanza, this one:
"Our vision should not blind us,
Our ego should not devour us,
And leave our remains on a river bed,
But make for us a heavenly pedestal, instead"
i just love it!. it is deep and compelling!.
wow!
keep them coming
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