Gentle Hands
by C!.S!. Scotkin
Gentle hands…………………Reach for you
proclaim love………………!.!. embrace you!.
from my eyes………………!.!.!.warm tears,
love streams………………… cleanse my heart!.
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by C!.S!. Scotkin Gentle hands…………………Reach for you proclaim love………………!.!. embrace you!. from my eyes………………!.!.!.warm tears, love streams………………… cleanse my heart!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: One day I will be capable of these things but for now I need to stick to my free verse as it suits my brain waves and how they travel!. I like it Muchos gracias !Www@QuestionHome@Com With respect this seems like another way for poor poets to seem more talented than they actually are!. In reality these are three terrible poems and the fact that you have intertwined them does not impress me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You have become one with the Trigee!. Pop the corks!Www@QuestionHome@Com You said it all in a few words!. That's one of the reasons I love these Trigees!. Www@QuestionHome@Com |