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Question: Is my writing righting anything!?

One Touch… Two Many

One touch
Two many
Set me back
Black walls
Calling
Charitable choir
Singing at me
Left me
Deaf from replies
I cry
So loneliness
Keeps me company
Allowing the freedom
To escape again

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
So loneliness
Keeps me company
Allowing the freedom
To escape again

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time
breaks chains
heals the wounds unseen
day after day just you wait
hope well shine through the walls
hurt well hurt no more you well see
the dark memory well bring a smile when darkness falls
get out of your past cage,forget about all the madness and rage
forgive yourselfe for being you only then you well know what to do
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We all need to unload at times,
sadly not all have the chance,
or indeed those that care, to listen!.

Funny really,How words can say so much,
but mean so very little,
To the ones that feel as you are feeling!.
Life is not fair ,
To the ones that care,

When there is so much they are missing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is my cup half full or empty, "A good artist knows when to quit!."
and your writings are fine, just as they are!.
People bounce around I guess, means nothing!. Write for your self
foremost!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have the beauty of creation at your fingertips!.!.!.right now, right then, and right forever!.!.!.!.

I'm SO sorry you're jealous, puny TDer!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

By far, one of the most classic writings from your collection! You have the skills we want to read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

BrilliantWww@QuestionHome@Com

alright i guess sounds like it was off of a cereal box!.Www@QuestionHome@Com