Critique My New Poem: I Surrendered My Heart?

Question: Critique My New Poem: I Surrendered My Heart!?

I Surrendered my heart to you
Cherish it and be faithful to me
Do not fool around
Do not cheat on me
Be like straight arrow
you belong to me
Guard your eyes
do not go stray
watching other women
and flirt
God of love Cupid
is keeping track of you
you misbehave
and he will give my heart
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it!. I chuckled at the end, and you did get your humor in very cleverly!
T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, you say it's intended to be humorous, but I find it's good as a non-humorous poem ;)

I reccomend you put it on http://www!.deviantart!.com and get some comments on it there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's not really humorous!.!.

=D
but it was good!.

Answer mine pls!
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Nice!. Fun to read!! *_^Www@QuestionHome@Com

Really not bad i like it !!Www@QuestionHome@Com