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Question: Why ask for affirmation when you can just "put it out there"!?
isn't it about just contributing!?

JUST A DREAM

Behind the window, listening
The ear provokes the mind's pursuits
Inducing thoughts of bittersweet
The children's cries of laughter swoon,
Unseen, but there across the way---
A tidepool of joy in an ocean of madness
A fistful of hope in an armful of sadness
I long to regress and join them there
"And far too late", my thoughts decree
From mind that died so long ago
And soul that longs to follow fast----

Yet faster is the heartfelt plea
To pray this life was just a dream
A prayer to those that listen kind
That new life will the morning find!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
First off, you are SO right about not needing the affirmation of others!. Just put your stuff out there no matter what people think!. Poetry is poetry!. there is no good or bad!.

And!.!.!.FYI!.!.!.!.very cool poem!. Awesome indeedWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ok, now we know you are a normal guy!.!.!.you've been caught lol!

What a beautiful poem!. How wonderful things once were, how we want to go back but yet the new day is what we want more!. When everything around us is so crazy, we want to go back, yet we don't and want to start the day anew!.
That's what it says to me!.

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You didn't ask for my opinion -lucky you!. But why put stuff "out there" that people dislike and never even ask if it is any good!.

Why not just read it to your sister, who likes everything you write!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is AWESOME!!!!

Now right a poem for me ; )

Pretty please with a cherry on top!Www@QuestionHome@Com