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Question: Help!.!.!.!.!.Finish this Poem!.!.!.!?
I wrote this like 7 years ago, but i cant finish it!.!.!. i dont know if its a start mid or end !.!. but i know i like it - lol !.!.!.!.

"Heven's on overload,
Hell is gonna burst,
People dont care anymore,
Not seeming to realise,
What they do with a knife!.!.!.
Might just affect them in there afterlife"Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
how long do u want it to be!? i can give you another stanza-

Hear the silent scream,
Drawn with a silver tip,
The worlds blackest moments!.
No ones can grasp,
We struggle in each task,
Just to make time pass!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Do people notice those matching pairs of overloads!?
There has to be somewhere to be; a place to go!.
Still, we all react to situations in this life, though
It's hard to judge reactions in a life that you don't know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com