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Question: My moms birthday poem help please!?
Thank you for everything you do for me
And all the years you spent to make me happy
And I promise you that you will soon see
A successful woman who is not sappy

I’m sorry for all the times I made you upset
We have had our ups and downs
And for all the things I did that I regret
But we can put that all behind us now

For all the bad times there have been good
And I truly appreciate you for all you do
I know I should help you out more if I just would
And wait there’s hope, I think I shall change, and do what I say too

I know you are eagerly waiting for me to say
I love you mom and happy birthday! :]
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think it's excellent!.!.!. it sounded very heart-felt and loving!.

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I would say
Mom:
It is your turn to be happy
you have done so much over the years
for me!.
This is your special time and day
because its your birthday
One year has gone by so fast
make sure the good times on your day last
On your birthday I will not disappoint you
have a nice time whatever you do
Go out and celebrate
don't worry about coming home late

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