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Question: What do this about my poem!? what does it mean to you!?
What do you think about my poem!? can you figure out the meaning!?
i am not a sailing boat in paradise
although i am a sailing boat in the wind and storm
if you think i am fragile
why did you let yourself in my disaster!?
my weakness brought you down
although i let you step on me while you were already apon me!.
i hear the inner laughter
that was when i heard your mindless speeches
and somehow you led me to that open door
that was yesterday
today i face the new you
the one who puts on ten layers of make up
just to be like them
remember me!?
remember you!?
remember your natural beauty
and our innocent laughters will follow you and me tonight
let it take us back to our peace
you may not remember them but they remember you!.
and that's why ill always love you!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
In addition to the other comments I posted on the previous submission of your poem, I'd add this: it almost sounds as if you feel a little guilty about caring so much for this person, yet you still care a great deal for them!. There is a subcurrent of light and darkness intertwined in the feelings!.!.!.it is subtle, but clearly there, whether you meant it to be there or not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Obvsiously it describes someone, or way you see them, and your feelings for them!?
10 points + right!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
i am thinking its about someone you care about that has two personalities!? It is very good, I think :)Www@QuestionHome@Com