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The sea!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.a vast expanse
Stretches out!.!.!.!.draws me within
Its grasp!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.to inundate
Reclaiming!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.desiccated life
A sponge!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.spawned in its bed
Renewed!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.restored

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In case you missed my answer to the last Trigee!.!.!.

"I know this form like the back of my head!."

I am learning more as the grow!. This one is oceanic!. It builds in waves, with a tidal surge for the finale!.

If the Trigee is my little seed rooted and sprouting, then I am most proud of this garden, likely more than is deserved!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now we're having THEME Trigee day!? And here I can barely write a decent Trigee, much less have the theme controlled!. This, however, is beautiful and skillful, with a picture perfect metaphor of the sponge!. Hopefully, I will soak up some of the Trigee talent floating about today!. Thank you for this poem, it touched me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The creator of this wondrous form now expresses wonder at the brilliance and variety found within!.

This Trigee is on a favorite subject of mine and you have made me see its depths and he is learning from his own creation!. This is what poetry should do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This really works!. Imagery is grand! Read together, the whole is much more than the sum of the two parts!. Very lovely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com