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Question: Is this another "Ocean trigee!?"!?
My first attempt!. Please be savagely honest, so that I don't do another one!.

An Ocean Trigee !.!.!.!.or!.!.!.!.!. Sail on or Ceylon, It's Not My Cup of Tea!.

O shun the trigee!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Beware of the allure
Avoid the rocky reef!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.That beckons you forward
Eschew this insane form!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.You will likely be skewered!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Don't bother to look for my first one! You nailed it! And watch out, this little buggers are addictive once they wiggle into your brain!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Too late--I've already decided to try one!. I'm not a fan of the form myself and have in the past never thought of trying one, but CS's have "allured" me!.

Now this one has me scared; I wasn't thinking about rocky reefs and all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Jeff! You wrote a Trigee! I am ecstatic!

Savagely honest!? Okay, it is a real Trigee!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The Trigee !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.a puzzle piece that
quietly, while spinning,!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.dangles on threads
awake in unraveling minds!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.which tantalize!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I ate!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.tasting irony
& decided!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.to split
the lines!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.with periods!.

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^^ Even though I have no expertise whatsoever with poetic forms, is it fine for me to say that I liked it (a lot)!? T'was bootiful!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

ATTEMPT!?!?
To be savagely honest, you've succeeded! (I hope that doesn't sound too harsh, I'm just being honest!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a true Trigee!. You've done did it! And funny too!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

O Jeff!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.How sweet
a Trigee!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.this is
from you!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.your Trigee

My heart is just fluttering! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

the first one is always tough!.!.
funny youre in a boat with it!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com