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Question: What do yoou think of my poem!?!?!?
Just friends
The way you left me
Makes me wonder
Why!?
Am I that bad!?
Maybe I wasn't good enough
To have such a guy
I should have know
That there's no you and me
But I was too late to understand
That we were just friends
When ever I see a falling star
I wish that you can give me one chance
To show you who I am
Every night I wonder
If she's beautiful
That girl you talk about
When I see you
I hold my tears away
So you won't see
That you're the reason
That I'm crying right now
But after all, Maybe I wasn't good enough
To have such a guy
I should have know
That there's no you and me
But I was too late to understand
That we were just friends
The two words I hate the most
"Just friends"
I loved you from all my heart
And even if you don't like me the same way
I'm still going to wish you luck
And say" I love you babe"
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is very sad it talks about
an ending to a friendship!.
You are asking what you did wrong
The pain of this is more than what
one can endure!.
He must have been special
because you love him with all your heart!.
I see by here you wanted more than just friends
Apparently he wanted you and the other person
What you need is someone who can treat you
like you are someone special
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Friends
It is important to maintain trust
along with communication
and don't wait
until something goes wrong
Once a friend is gone
they can be hard to get back
no matter how hard you try
but it takes two people to
make things work out!.
Friends are there for the other
person in good times and bad
or when things get rough
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It's good for prose, but you might wanna think about adding some punctuation so the reader knows when the stanza ends, if there's a pause, etc!.
also it's always nice to spice things up with rhyme schemes, metaphors, similes, or my all time favorite; allegory!.
Try to use vivid imagery to portray your deeper meaning so there is both a simple and complex translation!. Helps to inspire and spread your message!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Me thinks he twasn't good enough for a sweet gal as thee!.
Just friends passing friends let it be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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