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Question: Is This a Triple Trigee!? (spell checker says triage)!?
This White sand -------------------Between my toes
Waves wash over ---------------- As I Sit thinking
Salt spray on my lips ---------- I slowly lick it off

Sunlight bathes my skin-----------As Seagulls fly over
Shadow falls over me -------------- I look up
Offer me your hand --------------- I slowly grasp it

Pulling me up -----------------------I stand smiling
Children race by ------------------- In noisy play
We continue slowly -------------- Hand in handWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think the 1st and 3rd lines of the first stanza (2nd column)don't get along!. Other than that its good, but try to make your next Trigee good(er)!.
P!.S!. I don't know about triple Trigee, but if there is any then it should be 3 columns, as it was posted once before!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If I was literate and good at math (3X3)

I'd say it was a enneatrigee !.!.!.!.
or if I was being fancy and found some
latin hanging around the place !.!.!.

I'd say it was a nonatrigee !.!.!.!.hmmm that one
sounds like it would be pronounced better if
I could pronounce a 6 syllable words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com