Which one, in your opinion, is better!? A beginner poet, by the way!. Trying to practice!. I personally favor the first!. What do you guys think!?
1!. The cemetery,
a different dimension,
where the air is contaminated
with nostalgia,
and distant cries of grief!.
A surreal atmosphere,
like peering through a cloud!.
2!. The cemetery,
a dream-like dimension,
surreal,
like peering through a cloud
and on laughing gas
at the same time,
except you're not laughing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com