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Question: What do you think of this attempt at a Senryu!?
Allergies you say
Glasses stained in lash flung specks
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
not bad!.!.!. it got me to thinking about my allergies!!!

nose burning, eyes red
flowers in full bloom, I dread
I hate this season!!


Much love always,
TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com

a good attempt!Www@QuestionHome@Com