What do yout think of my poem?

Question: What do yout think of my poem!?

on my way to comet suicide

dont bothers trying
to talk me out of it
it was ment to
happen sometime
soon!. everything
happens for a reason
and everyone was
born for a purpose!.
and my life was ment
to be short lived!. please
do not blame yourself for
what will happen, this was
my choice- my desicion
to make!. so plese dont
cry when you here the
news, or here the rumors
you know are true!. just
know i felt no pain as i
lay myself to rest, it was
quick and painless so dont
be sad, it was my destiny-
that i needed to fullfill!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Interesting poem to say the least,
I would not want to become decease!.
at least not before the time has come,
I like to have a full life before I am done!.
The word you use comet is in the sky,
the word commit is what we always try!.
Even though the poem is a little dark,
I prefer love to be in my heart!.
Life is to short as it is,
it is your right to choice to live!.
So keep writing those poems,
and keep your thoughts grown!.
When you become a famous poet,
I will look forward to getting to know it!.

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i really like it i cannot write poems like that i want you to tell yourself good job because that was awesome and writing poems is really good to get out your angersWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, I hope you aren't serious, your life can be worth something if you accept Jesus into your heart and live for him!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Looks like you are reaching out for help in the wrong places!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, but change the last part, that says 'it was quick and painless'Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. If I were to write a poem it would not make sense at all!. Keep up the good work!! Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is sad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

get a lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com

people who are going to commit suicide dont tell people!.!.!.they just do it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yyea i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com