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Question: Excuse me, are you awake yet!?
Cobweb eyes
Flash filter views

Day broke open
Clouds cloaked in
Suns hopeful rays
Shining to me

Chase winged ones
To catch dreamers
Screams in the dark
Hushed echoes linger

Emerald answers
Cobalt questions
Driftwood worries
Cast away today

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A hard night turns into a beautiful day ,,,,,

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It sounds like a beautiful day, able to chase away the demons of the night with hope and beauty!. Enjoy it!. This is a very lovely poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved the lines, "cobalt questions, driftwood worries"!. What a soothing 230 AM bedtime poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sawdust sprinkled in my eyes last night
Opening them today is a real fight!.
Thank you for inquiring though
Creative juices will not flow
I must put my pen down!.

cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

More like this, please!
More, More, MORE!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

all my worries are put to rest as i lay myself down for a nap!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like a good day-Enjoy my friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com