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Question: Who can we trust, when we can't trust ourselves!?
Touched
Turned
Moved
Burned
By another

In Love we trust
Others
To protect us
Correct us
Deflect us from
Harm to
Ourselves

We stumble
Trip
Wobble and
Fall
On our faces
Disgraces
In haste this

Heart bleeds
With needs
As it feeds
Off another

Both weakened
Diminished
Finished

In Love we trust

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
you must trust yourself Hydropro!.
your feet and hands need you!.

im liking how you are writing your poem structure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, that poem really resonated with me!. I have made that same mistake! I agree that we have to trust ourselves first!. We ultimately walk through life like how we dream!.!.!.alone!. We have to be our own advocate and our own friend, we have to know we will be on our own side!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My Feelings Precisely,
How sad That so few Words,
can sometimes say too much!.
A Bond so strong can not be broken,
Only by the one who wishes
to break it!.
Therefore There was no True Bond to begin with!.
Just the Love of a Woman!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

never trust anyone in this world!. always be at alert!. try to calculate and asses the others feelings!. eliminate the waste and accept the reason!. negotiate/practice yourself to stand erect in the crowd!. enjoy the best part of the life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Always trust yourself FIRST!

(I don't know why, but my first thought in reading the first stanza was Johnsonville brats sizzling on the grill!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

For me, your poem says How can we trust ourselves, when there is no one to trust out there !? Well put!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is why I pray!.

(You need to block the pest!.)
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Well in GOD we trust And GOD trusts us to trust ourselves !. !.All others Pay CashWww@QuestionHome@Com