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Position:Home>Poetry> What say to "Atchafalaya River" poem?Question: What say to "Atchafalaya River" poem!? Grumbling, perverse river!.!.!.slither straight on!.!.!. Brown, brown, sniveling river-crone!. Snatch up those drifting cypresses and hustle Them haphazardly under bridge supports, to Vanish into bayous even you have never Watered!.!.!.muddy river hag!. Rogue river-child, did you caper and cavort With your trifles today!? Did you haul that Half-sunk hulk down!? Down, down, so the Perch can play!? Have you crumbled that rusty Barge!? Searched that tug yet!.!.!.drowned it to Travel far away to memory!.!.!.and fall apart, Rotting!? Muttering russet river, you told the Sun who You're going to meet, didn't you!.!.!.vile shrew!. Maybe you wish to visit a brother, or sister!. Perhaps a great, great grandmother!. Vied And vying river!.!.!.you should stay home and Gurgle to the trees!. Yes, old vixen, your cackle Only proves the danger of greener pastures!. Rambling tart, do not open the door to a Stranger!. A stranger too powerful!.!.!.strutting a Vimish spirit!. And potency!. Stay home!. Stay In your bed!.!.!.alone!. Why do I still not trust you, Capricious vamp!? Who comes to meet you!.!.!.for you've changed!.!.!. Harlot!. You are submissive, tranquil, today!. Knowing!. You are still waiting for that stranger To take you out of your ages-old home!. In spite Of bolted and steel-barred restraints!. What will you both take with you when you leave To vanish!.!.!.changing to something else!.!.!. Somewhere!. And you will see us again!.!.!. Inconstant gypsy witch-river!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Red she runs Unchained Old River structures Confines Combines Back pressure cooking As Calumet relieves Draining complaining All the way Down Force feeding Little Wax Lake Over drawn Annual resolve And she runs Red Thanks so much E!. Hope you don't mind, you had me all the way at Simmesport coming for the ride!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Brava! Bravissima! You've portrayed a very powerful witch of the swamps and bayous, with her wicked fingers of death and awful smells!. She's deceptive in her stillness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Bravo! <<clapping>> Reminded me: A friend of mine lost her sister during a major flood !.!.!.she was taken by the muddy waters and was later found miles away (by chance) within the debris!. Powerful!Www@QuestionHome@Com Excellent !!!,,,,This is just as powerful as Mother Nature herself,,,, Speaking of which,,,You and the crew be careful ok!?!?,,,Time to get out of dodge Www@QuestionHome@Com You have described the Atchafalaya exactly!. I second the Bravas! Now get out before Gustav comes, please!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is very powerful E! Indeed the river has a power unmatched, and assume the form of it's host!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wonderful!. Nothing's more powerful than the whims of Mother Nature!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A very strong shot! Now I need a cup of coffee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |