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Question: Have you time for a poem about, well, guilt!?






Gulf Coast Roulette
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Feeling guilty
dodging bullets!.

Ill winds
blow
away
complacent
thoughts
that somehow
tell you,
“you’re
a favored child!.”

Reality is
you’re a
red-headed
step-child
running for
your life
from one
angry
Mother
whose chaotic
Drunkards Walk
is not
to be
trusted!.

Is it
November
yet!?
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
And we wait!.!.!.

With the weight
The boulder
Of yesterdays
Angry Mother

Naturally

TY CSWww@QuestionHome@Com

Are you talking about dodging the hurricane's path!? Do not feel guilty about being missed or overlooked!. What is known about nature can not be found in books!. She is fickle - even unfaithful at times - but the course of the winds - is steady on her whims!. She has very good ears - be sure your voice is kind!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Gaea dies when we deny her, that is the truth!. I love the lines "Reality is/you're a/red-headed/step-child/running for/your life!." They speak greatly of the self-denial of the world, the nation, down to the individual, these words ring true!. Thank you for pointing this out!. Your poetry inspires!. Blessed Be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!. its amazing how the words are of pure simplistic style and yet the message and meaning are just emanated out there in giant sunbeams!.
seriously your poems are indeed built to inspire!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Iceberg
of guilt
made from fear,

Melts away
when the
shame game
table clears!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No it's not November yet but this poem is good any month of the year! I really like the form!
Cheers!
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Reality! An A+ for you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I feel that way every time I enter a vehicle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Mother Nature has been in the wine cellar again!.!.!. Prepare your selves !! Www@QuestionHome@Com

I saw an orange leaf today!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com