Are you ready for the change?

Question: Are you ready for the change!?

Summer days fly
in a whirlwind of colors!.
Soon to fade away

Enriched by autumn’s flame,
leaves take on a life of their own!.
Scarlet crispness!.

Winds attempting to
change places!.
Whistling through my hair!.

Bemoaning lost summer!.
Vibrant in their tempest!.
Stay awhile, please!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

We had an extended springtime here in Wyoming, which shortened our summertime a LOT!. And it looks like autumn will be coming a lot sooner than mid-September, too!. Gets me wondering what ever happened to "global warming!."

Your haiku is very enjoyable!. I've always enjoyed the challenge of haiku!. Very expressive!.

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very aesthetic images and delivery however!.!.!.i would have liked to see a bit more emotion, theme or metaphor used!. i can see u have taken on a wistful sort of voice but poetry should be thought provoking and while this poem is pertty when u are finished there is little left to explore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It will be summer here for 2 more months, I miss the colors of autumn sometimes, but not the snow that follows!. "Winds attempting to change places" is so true in New England, where I grew up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

End of summer, means the beginning, of the end of the roller coaster ride, that is life on the Coast!. Bring the colors on!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A poem with so many beautiful images!.!.!.i love the whirlwind of colours very much!. the autumn's flame, scarlet crispness, whistling winds!.!.!.are all cast in beautiful words!.!.!.a very lovely poem in deed!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com