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Question: President!.!.!.!.critique!.!.!.!.pleas!.!.!.
Last night I painted memories inside my head's walls,
They were put there by a preacher to keep the 'bad' stuff out,
And here I am sitting in my own one foot long bathtub,
I'm finding it really hard to sink down to the bottom!.

Yesterday seemed so damn funny how it all fell into place,
A sudden shake and here we go another earthquake!.
I decided that I would breathe in the ash from your cigarettes,
Just so I could feel so close to you, or as close as possible!.

I want to go to war just to prove the whole world wrong,
Governments not virtue, it's like your most hated song!.
It's always on the radio and you just can't get away from it,
Stand up Mr President, doesn't this make you proud!.

Hands down cause this is the greatest dream I've had,
You see I replaced myself with another heartless fad,
Then I fitted in with everything and everyone,
Oh God help me who have I become!.

I'm on the verge of committing Suicide,
No not the kind that will take my own damn life,
I just want to let go of all my sanity,
Cause then I can finally learn how to breathe!.

I'm an artist, a poet a man without a face,
I'm your lover, your taste, whose the real waste!.
Thank you MR President for making me see,
Just how truly this world can learn to be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your poem is like lyrics to a song!.
I do not know much about poetry but I think they are more of lyrics than a poem!. I enjoyed reading it, though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com