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Question: Are all words worth something to someone!?
Here I sit
Staring
Daring myself
To admit for once
What I have done
To all who know nothing
Yet I can not hide from me

I am me just as you see
And as you see me
Is as I shall be
For all I can be
Is me

I look ahead
And see behind
Try to erase
Thoughts in my mind
That brought me here
That brought this fear
Controlling my life
I can't explain it
And you can not know
Only with these words
Can I try to show
Internal strife tearing
My soul I'm bearing
To strangers To friends
Hoping once again
To breathe

Forgive me

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Strange !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
How!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Somehow!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
A blank piece of paper!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Becomes !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
The Soul
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If Forgiveness,
Is what you seek,
That alone,head on,
You meet!.

Only one thing matters here,
What you see
and what you fear!.

You may search your soul,
A thousand fold,
It Is you
that must let go!.

However Dark,
However empty,
You are who you know!.

So my Dear Friend,
you may stumble through Life's Path!.
It Is you that has to live with It!.
Until You can surpass!.

And with the wisdom
that you have,
It's plain
For all to see,
If you can not
Forgive yourself,
Then tell me,
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"The past cannot be changed, but today can be anything you want to it
to be!."

Blame, shame, guilt, pass, with attitude of, "I did not know!."
Now knowing, I forgive myself, then others, and walk a new path!.

I'm tiring to beat the clock, gotta go!. Fair winds!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, intense!.

I liked that!

Your poem screamed humanism that could be felt in between every word!.
Starting second stanza, your poem became more fast-paced, which was due to your clever syntax!.

I liked it!. Good job!. Keep it up, you're good!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is your birthright to have human feeling!. There is nothing to forgive!.
Good second verse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Keep writing, conversing, exposing; words prove to be cathartic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Catharsis is free with your membership!. Nothing to forgive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think the second stanza was kinda useless, but i really like the how easy it is to relate to this poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hehe!.!.
I think all my friends are Still strange!.!.
but once they were all stranger!.!.

!.!.To err is human to forgive divine!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I didn't smell anything!.!.!.and, like Elaine, all of my friends were once strange!.Www@QuestionHome@Com