First off, I "feel" the emotion in my poem, but I do not express it how the poem is worded!. (I do not cut!.) But this poem still is meaningful to me!. Please give me constructive feedback!.
A cut for the time you kissed me,
A cut for the time I cried!.
A cut for the time I loved you,
And two for the time you lied!.
Four more for the times I've suffered,
Thanks to your careless mind!.
I should not have turned to this,
Because of a silly boy!.
Yet even though I shouldn't,
Your love is impossible to avoid!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com