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My Laptop Minds intertwining offer wisdom touching hearts treasure chest of wealthWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It is a lovely statement!. If it isn't about nature, in Japanese it is called a Senryu!. If it is in English, we call it an Ameri-ku (creative new terminology), because we can't really render this form into English!.You have nonetheless written something beautiful and wise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "Squish squash, sling that slang! I'm always right back at ya; Like!.!.!. my BOOMERANG!!" "That's right, I'm Sokka! It's pronounced with an 'okka'! Young ladies!.!.!. I rocked ya!" Bouncer-looking guy: That's too many syllables, bub!. *Throws him out* - Sorry, I just HAD to quote that hilarious "haiku" from Avatar!. =) Anyway, when haikus come from me they're never a relief; for I write at least 10 of them in Haiku form to create one poem!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh ma, you've done it again now haven't you!. We touch so many hearts here!. I know I've never felt so alive as I do when I get to visit my friends!. You all can never really replace my real family, but you're my extended family and I luvs ya all!. I have comfort when I hurt, friendship when I need it, advice when I don't know what to do!. You may not know it, but you are my friends!. I don't bother with anyone around me!. All stupid hillbillies!. That's a whole other subject!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com You have used exactly the right number of words, and more importantly the right words!. Wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it! My 9 year old niece once wrote this one that sticks with me!. Summertime is here!. The weather is getting hot!. My cat licks her fur!. cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com Very nice with true written all over it!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I knew I would learn something today!Www@QuestionHome@Com |