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Question: Is this haiku a welcomed relief!?
from one who tends to use too many words!?

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It is a lovely statement!. If it isn't about nature, in Japanese it is called a Senryu!. If it is in English, we call it an Ameri-ku (creative new terminology), because we can't really render this form into English!.You have nonetheless written something beautiful and wise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Squish squash, sling that slang!
I'm always right back at ya;
Like!.!.!. my BOOMERANG!!"

"That's right, I'm Sokka!
It's pronounced with an 'okka'!
Young ladies!.!.!. I rocked ya!"

Bouncer-looking guy: That's too many syllables, bub!. *Throws him out*

- Sorry, I just HAD to quote that hilarious "haiku" from Avatar!. =)

Anyway, when haikus come from me they're never a relief; for I write at least 10 of them in Haiku form to create one poem!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh ma, you've done it again now haven't you!. We touch so many hearts here!. I know I've never felt so alive as I do when I get to visit my friends!. You all can never really replace my real family, but you're my extended family and I luvs ya all!. I have comfort when I hurt, friendship when I need it, advice when I don't know what to do!. You may not know it, but you are my friends!. I don't bother with anyone around me!. All stupid hillbillies!. That's a whole other subject!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

You have used exactly the right number of words, and more importantly the right words!. Wonderful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it! My 9 year old niece once wrote this one that sticks with me!.

Summertime is here!.
The weather is getting hot!.
My cat licks her fur!.

cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice with true written all over it!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I knew I would learn something today!Www@QuestionHome@Com