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Question: Poetry!!! Review and rate 1-10!. What do you think of my poem!?Please rate or review!.!?
Inner stength

You are the subconscious being that whispers in my ear
That permeates the very cells throughout my body
You are the divine presence within my soul
You define my very character

You are the formidable force inside of me
That drives me to overcome obstacles
Too extreme and too daunting for mere mortals
You help me to continue, to push through adversity

You control my strengths and my weaknesses
You control my actions and my reactions
When I feel as though all is lost, you give me hope
And suddenly I am enlightened, I begin anew

Many a fool have blundered and have relied upon
Brute strength, brute force
Brute strength is temporary, but internal strength is everlasting

You are my inner strength, the beast within
My conscious is clear and I am ready
It is time for me to unleash you!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
9/10

Very well-written!. I like the first stanza very much!. It's an inspiring poem and deserves definite praise!

Good luck, and keep writing :)

God bless,
EmilyWww@QuestionHome@Com

9 1/2 it was good :]Www@QuestionHome@Com