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I am 13 years old!.
Now my cancers gone,
And my loved ones gone astray!.
No more stopping by,
Just to see if I’m okay!.
No more stopping by,
With a “’hey” or “how’s it going”
No More helpful words,
To keep me from forgoing!.
“You’ve had to grow up fast!.”
Is what I often hear!.
I say - The Cancer may be gone,
But “Remissions” barley near!.
No one will understand,
No matter how they might try!.
The medicine needed was love,
Which they wouldn’t supply!.
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Great poem 10/10!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Love your poem!. I can relate to it a lot my father had cancer and ppl would come to see him everyday!.!.!. but now that he is gone to a better place ppl don't come no more to see the familyWww@QuestionHome@Com
If you actually ARE a child recovering from cancer I wish I could cheer you up by saying you are a good poet, but I'd be lying!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a lovely poem! My aunt has cancer so I can relate a little bit!.
I have never found a good poem by a guy this young before!. Keep in writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Bravo! Bravo! I applaud you!. You are very talented!. Your words are very true!. Don't give up on people though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com