Need some feedback on this poem in progress?

Question: Need some feedback on this poem in progress!?

I cannot be what needs to be
to make your voice stop hurting me
i let you go, i did my part,
it's like a nail inside my heart!.
i really need to let you be
So i can stop hurting meWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The last two lines are everlasting and full of wisdom ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hello,
I see this poem has pain in it
because it talks about breaking up
The first line sounded like the other person
had high expectation of you wanting perfection
As painful as it was you broke up
telling her you will let her go
Its like a nail inside my heart
feels more like it was torn out!.
You had to let her go so
you can heal!.
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Absolutely beautiful!. Isn't it funny how such beauty can be born from such pain!? Keep writing, you have a natural talent!Www@QuestionHome@Com