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Question: Awakening!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Do you remember the time
when you were mad at me
in your hot-headed way
and i reacted in my hot-headed way!?

Then i realised i was wrong
and apologized profusely!.

I had never done that before
and in that moment
i realised
it was
because
i love you!. Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It doesn't matter if he remembers it,
what obviously matters is that YOU do!

Keep remembering!

We all should have such awakenings!.!.!.!.!.!.

maWww@QuestionHome@Com

I know when that day happened for me I was, at long last, starting to be an adult!. Keep writing!. On the technical side, my teacher says a poem becomes stronger when you can eliminate the unneeded words, such as,
"the , but, a " or any word that does not make your poem stronger by its addition!. I really enjoyed your thoughtful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats alright! Just too short and i am not sure about that word, hot-headed!. Www@QuestionHome@Com