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Question: Go to her heart ,poem please read !?
Say
What you want
She says
But I don’t have anything to say
I m the unread page
Puzzle
lost path on the earth
That never found a country
Tell me what you are
She says
I was a little girl one day
And that’s all I know
After all
I m gone
alone


The fire is unspoken
And the anger is rage
Pain torments my heart
and my body is lost
Shout
She says
Who screams
Too late
Never gets what she wants
Who fight after the end
Is a loser in both sides
Die
She says
I wish
But even this is far
They say life is hope
And I find it an endless jail

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Oh Boy!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Very good!. I like the conversation going
on, i've written like this myself in some poetic poems !.

I find it dark, as to say, many a young person can find
themselves in this situation and i see a relation to the PoemWww@QuestionHome@Com

i really like that i especially like the "she says" bits they punctuate the poem nicely

is it a conversation between you and your thoughts!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, that was very interesting to read!.!.!.i don't often encounter poems where it's a "someone says" thing!.!.!.thanks for sharing!.!.!.
Words are the best invention!.!.!.!.Keep using them!.!.!.!.!.=)

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im really chilled out at the moment and enjoyed that :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com