What's you're opinion [Poetry]?

Question: What's you're opinion [Poetry]!?

Just something I put together about an hour ago!.

The Truth

You left me suffering in a world
that's mad beyond reasoning!.
I'm left lying here, breathing
in the toxic scent of depression!.
This life has no value in your eyes!.
It is forever a tragic, loveless story
of pain, ruin, and despair!.
The only possible advancement is
termination, and the only path that
leads to happiness is delusion!.
In your broken world, all I
can pray for is eternal damnation!.
?2008 ~M!.A!.PWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Hey thats really good ! sounds like song lyrics to me :)
I actually cant think of anything I would change there
well done :D
x
ps, i really like the last lineWww@QuestionHome@Com

well it didn't make me cry!
lol jk i don't Cry at poems!.
Anyway, i thought it was good, i had to read it again to understand it at first because it just blanked straight through me, and i didn't connect the words i guess LOL!.!.
but great xoxWww@QuestionHome@Com