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Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like this poem I wrote? Thanks for the feedback?Question: Do you like this poem I wrote!? Thanks for the feedback!? Black
and White Dark and light A vintage photo Stars in the shady night Black is sharp precise and intense White is eye catching silky and dense White is an angel sitting on the pearly gates Black is a murderer giving someone their fate White is the beginning and black is the end Black is a foe and white is a friend Black is coffee White is cream If they work together, they are an ideal team!. do you like this poem!? yes no, why why not, good, bad!.!.!. thankyou!Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I personally like this poem!. You have used some nice descriptions and similes and your conclusion of two opposites working together is really good!. And you have acutally used rhyming which is always nice in a poem, and the meter flows fairly well!. Good job!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Not sure that I like the black/white contrast, but overall the content is nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com That's pretty good!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |