Okay I need help with this, it’s not really a poem; just something I thought sounded creepy!.
Well I need help with the last few lines, I don’t like the “He killed his”, “He thought” and “He begged”
I don’t like all the He’s in the beginning of each line, I’d like a different way to say those lines!.
I was thinking of calling him “it” or “thing” lol god I don’t know!.
Thanks for your time!.
Fuzzy Logic:
You are having problems with my logic, most people do!.
I have a new term for my logic; it is called “fuzzy logic”!.
It is a logic that disturbs my psychiatrist(s), because of its cold, hard simplicity!.
It is not filled with “what if”, but with “what is”!.
They too can not deny its truthfulness, its perfection; it terrorized them!.
Though I’m not a danger to society; they pray and hope no one else thinks like I do!.
For if they did, societies would turn in on its self; a new kind of chaos would consume man kind!.
I have driven one of my psychiatrists mad; the poor soul!.
He killed his entire family, dared to ask me the meaning of life, the universe and everything in it!.
He thought I didn’t know, because he didn’t; I told him!.
He begged me to take it back, I could not; he killed himself!.
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