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Question: What about this poem its how i feel now !?
Entrapment
by Chris


Hopelessly bound
unfettered
by the chains of love's grip
- greatest gift,
fate's cruelest curse!.

Wherefore do I weep
at knowing the joy,
the warmth,
at feeling the peace,
the fire!.

Wherefore do I weep
unable to complete ,
to be,
unknown the kiss,
the flames!.

Wherefore do I weep
at loving not living
seeing not touching
breathing not sharing
holding not loving!?

All,
because I, The Fool,
am no more!?
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
hey chris u again made me weep for u!.!.!.!.!.will u give me a chance to share your sadness!.!.trust me i love u !.UP SET FOR U!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Did you write this!?
It's beautiful, but sad!.

I'm sorry you are so sad!.
You have cheered me up so many times!.
I wish I had the words to make you feel better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very interesting!.!.!.


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did you write that !? wow I thought you were just about jokes-but then they do say intelligence is linked with humour!. For want of a less cliched word, your poem is excellentWww@QuestionHome@Com

Mediocre!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its nice!. In my opinion your poem describes about some one who is in vain of love and affection!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

does duck need a new water friendWww@QuestionHome@Com

its really nice
keep up the good work and i hope u feel better :)Www@QuestionHome@Com