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Question: Please read and comment on my poem!!! thanx!!?
Before I Was Me

Before I was me you held my hand and guided me,
Giving me the wings to set me free!.
Before I was me you taught me,
The difference between what's right,
And what's wrong!.

Before I took that leap, you held me in your arms!.
Giving me the strength to go forth in this world,
And the courage to stand on my own,
Before I took that leap you gave me the wisdom,
To see the potential in myself!.

Before I flew on my own you whispered words of love,
Building the character in which makes me, me!.
Before I flew on my own you taught me to hope,
And chase each and every dream!.

Before I was me you held me gently in your arms,
Wrapping me close to your heart,
Guiding me!.
Before I was me you gave me your love,
Turning a once baby into a young lady,
With just a simple promise from the heart!.

Thanks for reading!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i kinda thought u were an angel in heaven with God at first[before u were u;it made me really think!. It is very good! Mike PWww@QuestionHome@Com

Absolutely fantastic!I like this sentence ''Turning a once baby into a young lady''!.I'm waiting for your next one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice use of words and i love the lines it goes well together it was lovely!. Keep writing!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

awsome 10/10!.!.!. justa thought get ur poem copyrighted and maybe published that wat nobody can steal it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com