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Question: Please read my poem and comment!?
Rise Above the Crowd

The world is full of people,
Content to be what they are,
Who never know the joy of success;
They lack the will to go that far!.

Yet in this world there is a need,
For some to lead the rest
The rise above the average life,
By the giving of their best!.

Am i the one who dares,
To try when challenged by the task
To rise to heights I've never dreamed,
Or is that to much to ask!?

This can be my year,
For great purpose to achieve
If I accept the challenge,
And in myself believe!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
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