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Question: Poem i wrote please voice your opinion!.!.!?
Just You
Why would you want to be someone else
When you could be better by being yourself
Why pretend to be someone you are not
When you have something they haven't got

Cheating yourself of the life you have to live
Deprives others of that only which you can give
You have much more to offer by just being you
Than walking around in someone else's shoes

Trying to live the life of another is a mistake
It is a masquerade; nothing more than a fake
Be yourself and let your qualities show through
Others will love you more for being just you

Remember that God loves you just as you are
To him you are already a bright shining star
Family and friends will love you more too
If you spent time practicing just being you!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Ehmagawd that's really good x10! You should totally become a poet!. I normally don't like poetry and that was just sooooo good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, it sounds like a beautiful song!. very true and heartfelt!. you should try to get it published!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I just love your writing soo much! I've read 3 of your poems!. Your quite a poet!. Emil me sometime and we can exchange poems jerseygirldevil@hotmail!.com!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i absolutly love it! great writingWww@QuestionHome@Com