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Question: Will you please tell me your opinion of my poem!?
I would like to see what you think these song lyrics I wrote are about!. I've heard a few different thoughts on another website, so I want to see if you can understand the story!. Please rate as well!


"Rosie"

Watch her in silence
Study her in whispers
Wishful thinking won't save
Her from all that's done

Broken tears and broken sighs
Bleeding cuts that pour out lies
Rosie, Rosie
Can't save herself anymore

Pray for her soul
Hope for her life
Her trial had an error
Does she continue to die!?

Broken tears and broken sighs
Bleeding cuts that pour out lies
Rosie, Rosie
Can't save herself anymore

Listen, listen
Does her heart beat!?
Does it still beat!?
Hold on
Rosie, dear Rosie
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i think this is really good(Y)
i read your sterotyping thing on your profile too, thats well good!
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I like it a lot, but I would use a different name because of the Bruce Springstein song Rosalita (it's often called Rosie)!. Www@QuestionHome@Com