Do you think my poem is okay?

Question: Do you think my poem is okay!?

wrapping that string around my heart i cried
you made me feel what i've always wanted to, but i didn't know
it would be like this
it hurts
it plays with me
my thoughts that ran smooth
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You ask what it is we think,
But I ask that of you!.
Is it from the heart!?
That is a start!
Write for you,
Not for us,
But we will comment all the same,
And post our own,
'Cause thats the game!

I like your poem, but it needs a little more rhythm and even lines, keep writing though! Www@QuestionHome@Com