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Question: Love poem, I'm still new to this!!?
I'm still pretty new to writing poems!. Some friendly advice is welcome and opinions of course (polite ones please)


Pretending you never happened
The constant lies are too much
Pretending the connection was never there
Memories all I have to clutch

Pretending that your words don't kill me
You know things shouldn't be this way
Pretending that I didn't just catch you staring
I wish you could hear silent pleas

Pretending that you never wanted me
Are we both ashamed!? Or perhaps afraid
Pretending that the dance was never done
Why can't you just fade!?

I fall to pieces
You hold back
Love decreases
My world becomes black

I am in love with you!.
You said you love me
That was your cue
So why can't we agree!?

No more lies
Take my hand
Look at me in the eyes
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Its great!keep writing poems,you're really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really like this poemWww@QuestionHome@Com