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Question: Is this what listening to creepy music gets you!?
"Footsteps in a Gothic Cathedral"

Admission,
inclusion
in the fire, in the soul
of one
with black lips
speaking prophecies!.

The crypt,
the birth
of a new nature
dwelling latent
within the words
I scribe
with shaking hand!.

What will be born
from this creation,
what have I made!?
A demon,
an angel,
a self
even more terrifying
than the mirror image
which sang to me
the damning lullaby
from the first!.

Prayers from the saints,
statues collecting dust,
to a god
who so often
fails to hear me,
fails to hear,
fails me!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
God always hears!. Sometimes, He says "no!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

God and the individual are tricky twigs to bundle!. One of the most important lessons for an artist (or any human, for that matter) is learning what we can expect of God!.

Like a commuter train's rails, there must be a third connecting member for the energy to flow!.

God wants a progeny, an outcome!. Not just an orgasm!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The person this poem is describing reminds me of someone who has lost 99% of their faith in god and is on the brink of changing into something they are not sure they want to be!. That last 1% of faith is hanging on and by the end of the poem, the lack of faith wins after allWww@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it!. To many people are afraid to touch on the darker side of things even though it's completely natural!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oooo!!.!.wooow!.!.!!.!.i never saw a "dark" poem coming!.!.!.
come on!!!!.!.!."dark" poems are very stupid,over done,and everything else bad
u cant wrightWww@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, wow!. That last stanza is amazing!.

Good work!.
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I guess your idea of "creepy" music is Fallout Boy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com